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Steve Paul Jobs - Biography

Steve Jobs was born on February 24 1995 in San Francisco, California, U.S.
I admire Steve Jobs because he was not only a entrepreneur, also a business person, an industrial designer and a creator of technology. I really admire his effort and the way that he elected to become a CEO and CO-Founder of Apple Inc, one of the best companies of technology. 

He died on October 5, 2011 in Palo Alto, California, U.S, the cause of death was cancer. 

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  1. Your company name13 de enero de 2018 a las 21:12

    Good job Ethienne, yet there are four details to modify:
    1. an industrial designer (use of an article, in this case an)
    2. the way he chose (the verb is ok, the detail was the tense)
    3. become (spelling)
    4. one of the best companies (we use plural to reinforce something is the best among others)

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